A pause on the banks of where this river bends into the third and final act. Back in boat Saturday.
Other titles: Calculated Inaction, Biding One's Time, Nourishment Through Inaction
a couple thoughts:
One more edit re dotting i's, crossing t's, continuity. A new opening, Tom and Wanda sunset, THEN the bedroom. Opening credits over Tom driving from Wyoming into Colorado. I'm actually going to finally finish this thing . Then, I've finally decided, onto Wakpa, which I will complete by end of summer. Maybe throw some notes at that over the next couple days.
Bingo. Radical Change re form and story is absolutely the Right Move and pretty much exactly why I'm choosing it over Baseball Movie as follow-up.
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